I like lines like that which could go either way. There’s a poetry to it. For me, it didn’t matter if it was true or the character was simply being quick on his feet and making up an excuse for why he was passed out through all the ruckus. It also said a lot with a few words in either case. I grew up in the rural south and had my share of box fans so, even if it wasn’t true, it was entirely believable.
No wasted words. Straight to the meat and enough said without saying it. This is real stuff.
I'm new. Always wrote stories but was too busy getting into fights or other trouble to bother with grades. Landed my ass in commercial construction. Didn't expect to find you on here. Love your style.
Shit happens. It just seems to happen more when you’re a teen. And more than that when alcohol is involved. And more than that when a lot of alcohol is involved. It’s the circle of life’s fuckups. Better that we’re looking back on it and not forward to it.
Thank you very much for sharing. I'm also currently writing about all the terrible things I did as an alcoholic. It's always comforting to see I'm not the only one.
The box fan line was great. Well done. Moving on to part 2!
Awesome man. Thank you.
It was true.
I like lines like that which could go either way. There’s a poetry to it. For me, it didn’t matter if it was true or the character was simply being quick on his feet and making up an excuse for why he was passed out through all the ruckus. It also said a lot with a few words in either case. I grew up in the rural south and had my share of box fans so, even if it wasn’t true, it was entirely believable.
We have to hang!!!
No wasted words. Straight to the meat and enough said without saying it. This is real stuff.
I'm new. Always wrote stories but was too busy getting into fights or other trouble to bother with grades. Landed my ass in commercial construction. Didn't expect to find you on here. Love your style.
Willl be following close and with anticipation.
Awesome! Thank you man. Glad to have you here.
Wow! Sammy you can write! Can’t wait for the next chapter sir!
I appreciate that. Thank you!
I’m on the edge of my seat for the story to finish! Thank you for baring your humanity 🤍
Wow. Thank you. I never thought of it that way.🤍
How long will I have to wait for the rest of the story?! I'm hooked!
Til Sunday! That’s nice to hear, thank you.
How have I never heard this story!?
Haha. Very few people have heard this story. It’s a tough one to tell. I’m not proud of any of it.
We all did stupid stuff when we were young. Glad you learned from it though!
Shit happens. It just seems to happen more when you’re a teen. And more than that when alcohol is involved. And more than that when a lot of alcohol is involved. It’s the circle of life’s fuckups. Better that we’re looking back on it and not forward to it.
Thank you very much for sharing. I'm also currently writing about all the terrible things I did as an alcoholic. It's always comforting to see I'm not the only one.
Haha thanks for reading it.
You are definitely not alone.
I shot a man in Reno just to watch him die long time ago
You should write a song about it.
They call me the troll in black
Well perhaps community service and picking up litter for the rest of your life will be restitution for this crime.